http://superhot-funtime.blogspot.com
THROUGH THE TUNNEL
Plot too short
The setting is not clear
You wrote the word friends in the middle of the sentence with a capital letter
= 7/10

THE SILK SCARF

I cant see the setting and plot because you applied some colours
You wrote Plaza with a small letter
You wrote shopkeeper as two words but it's only one word
=6/10




http://walteriquescrew.blogspot.com

Your work are definetly good. You stick to the rules and you provide what is realy needed but you started sentences with a small letter.




http://rtunombili.blogspot.com

Throught the tunnel
The plot is too short but the grammar is good.
=7/10
The answers about THE SILK SCARF was not published the time i m commenting.
= nothing